I like how it starts really calming and the gets more intense as the song goes on. That was pretty cool.
I lke how it has "breaks" and transitions that really complement the song, work with the flow really well, and manage not to clash at all.
The voices were a little weird and sounded a tad bit off, but definitely weren't bad. I can also say the same thing about the dubstepish parts as well. You still did a good job of not making the dubstep bass drop parts too harsh which is good.
Lastly, it really fits what you were going for and I thought it was cool how well the song fit with that last part of of the description.
Overall, a pretty good song. You've got some talent.
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