The beat is nice, but you need a little of melody and less distorced noises ;D
try on the next time that ;)
the problem with the distorced noise its because 5min later start to be a ear rape and note a good music.
thanks for ur comments - il keep em in mind on my newer tracks :)
It has nice variation and such but I dont Like the distorted synth very much.. but you have nice drops and pads :) so thumbs up for that (:
ta very much - shame u dont like the synth but our differences are what make the world interesting :)