Seriously dude, if you thought that could in anyway, NOT be constructive, or in anyway was offensive... well, frankly, you are WAY TO POLITE! I agree with you though. This wasn't a bad peice, and I've heard many a piece where they go overboard with the percussion.
Ummm... Needs work.
Here we go.
First off, welcome to the world of NGAP. Sorry if that's redundant, I don't know if anyone's properly welcomed you yet. Now, let's get to the review.
Your FX were good.
The drums and other percussion samples weren't overblown, which is something that's easy to do.
It was really easy for me to tell that your main melody was a preset arpeggiated melody from the Zeta synth. I'm really glad you weren't obnoxious with it, as I've done that in the past and frankly, it hasn't worked out. My recommendation, as it is to all people who write music, is to start with your own melodies. This may seem daunting, but if you pick up a music theory book, it soon becomes easier than you think.
Best of luck. Also, if you feel this review wasn't constructive, or was offensive in any way, please feel free to contact me directly. Such was not my intention.
very nice dude
everything is timed perfect and it s a great song 10/10 5/5