This sounded great!
I really liked the creativity you had on this? I think it needs a bit more improvement on the mixing, particularly the levels on the drums, and also make use of panning so the sound is spaced out. It also, might sound a bit better if the tempo was around 10BPM faster, though that's just personal preference. I really like this, great job! ;D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.