It doesn't loop right...
For a loop, this doesn't loop very well. And another thing, when someone does a sample track -especially one as short as this- I expect them to put in the extra effort to make it worth listening to. Make it better than the original, not on-par! Use what you got man!!!
I'm only saying this, cause Your other tracks hint you've got some real talent, but It doesn't seem like you're swinging at your full potential. Keep on playin B. Keep on playin...
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i kinda get what you mean but i'm confused which pause people are talking about, i'm assuming it's how it doens't loop
a couple of problems...
For a sample job (and I'm not huge in hip-hop, but know this myself as a reference), it's choppy... that momentary pause really hurts the flow of the sample and will make it really difficult for myself and others to use it effectively in our own songs respectively. Also there is an imbalance in the way this sample goes, again thanks in part to that momentary pause. By my standards, and I'm doing this on a curve, this could be done a whole lot better. You've done a good effort though, but that pause hurts your rating some. Polish it up a little and you've got a kickass sample on your hands.
the pause is because it loops and doesn't loop well. The transition between the samples sounds good in my opinion but if you mean the longer pause of silence that's from the loop.