The white flag
This shit right here is badass hands down!!!
Author Comments
You know what this is. Made for a nice man like you, spit some hard rap.
Made in LMMS using the "Orchestral" VST, some default instruments on custom settings, and drums from the 9th Wonder pack. Am I getting better yet!?
masterkl16 responds:
Lol thanks!
Alright
This one is definitely sounding pretty crazy.
In this one, its not that I don't like the instruments being used, its the instruments you used together. Such as, that synth didn't seem to go with the brass very well, and maybe it does and it was an EQ problem.
I believe there were too many switchups. But I didn't judge it from that perspective, I judged from the perspective of it being a song and not a song someone can rap to. I do think that if you took some of the switch-ups, added a verse/chorus somewhere (I couldn't find one arranged perfectly), and did all that together and try to blend it. This would be something great.
masterkl16 responds:
Good points. I personally am looking to create more of this kind of music, with multiple different instruments mashed together. Why not, you know? As far as EQing goes, this song had none whatsoever at the time I uploaded it. (Hence the "WIP" next to the title.) I probably won't put up the remastered version though.
It's interesting that you think verses can't be added to this. I put together three verses, bridges, AND choruses on this track, and it came out pretty commercial sounding minus a few composition issues here and there. You should listen to it a few more times.
Thanks for the review!
nice broo
Its different I like that
Credits & Info
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- 674
- Downloads
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- Score
- Waiting for 2 more votes
- Uploaded
- Oct 23, 2011
- 1:51 AM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 5.3 MB
- 4 min 41 sec
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