Beautiful.

So simple and pleasant. I enjoyed the melodies, and they captured that roaring fire scenery really well.

I didn't like the way you ended it though. The last couple notes didn't flow to well with the rest of the song. Perhaps you could have put in one last note that faded out in the end. I think that will work a lot better than what you did.

Overall, you show a lot of talent in this one song. Keep making more. :)

Can you please review me back on my latest submission? I will appreciate your feedback.

~ Luxomni