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Here's another long intro progressive trance track. I've been told to mix the sounds to the fullest and after hours of working soley in the mixing part, I believe I have made it not only better sound-wise but also better structure-wise. It all started out with a piano melody wich you will be able to hear at the 5 minute mark. From there it just proceeded into a very progressive track.

I would like to quote the lyrics from "Lemon" by U2 on their album Zooropa for this commentary:
A man makes a picture
A moving picture
Through the light projected
He can see himself up close
A man captures colour
A man likes to stare
He turns his money into light to look for her


A general time mark to skip the intro would be at 2:00 but you'll miss out alot.

With all that off my chest, enjoy this humble piece.

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Clean and enjoyable

Enjoyable start, nice to have something a little from the usual drone with the rhythm you've managed to mix in. The piano sounds a little weird, a bit muffled perhaps, or to sharp a decay? I'm not sure but somehow it sounds a little off. The rest of the instruments sound great and your time spend mixing has paid off, everything sits nicely in it's place and you've made full use of both sides of the sound scape. The synth that comes in at 2:30 sounds a little dissonant, but the melody line it plays is enjoyable and creates an atmosphere of anticipation. The piece's structure is nice and i never found myself bored or tired of repetition. Overall i enjoyed this song even though trance is really my type of music. You've obviously put some effort into this and that comes through in it's cleanness. Good stuff!

23i responds:

Thank you, PIED3. This is kinda what I was hoping for, you made a great review.

I was "sound-blind" when I was mixing the part where all the instruments play at once so the day after, I had to go back and re-edit everything. I am thankful you pointed out somethings out for me, really appreaciated.

Once again, thank you for the depth in your review.

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Oct 19, 2011
10:18 AM EDT
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7 min 20 sec

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