could be better.
It starts great with the piano, after that-
I'd say differentiate the sounds...
There is almost no variety. It all kinda blends into one thick grey mesh...
I think you have too many layers and the synth is just so generic everything blends in with it.
With percussion, add something other then a kick...Snare? Hats? if they're there, I can't hear them.
More elements, more things to add variety, highs and lows and sidechain would help.
Hey, thanks for the review! :)
I agree with what you say, especially the ting with percussion, as I only added a kick (a bad one too) and nothing else.
I also struggling to get variation, so this is something I have to work on.
And about sidechaining, I haven't learned that yet. :p