well , its not bad but i think the sentens that you make was awful , i mean (have more than 4 legs) i think its very childish quiz & i think if you practice more & more in your voice to fix it i think your ganna be good voice acter " cuz i need a voice acter like u 4 my future flashes'' YOU are the 1 who i was searching for ..... , but is a good beginning , i hope you practice & the old lady is not good for your voice :) good luck dude ! :D
to help with the noise of your voice. I found it's helpful to turn your head sideways of the microphone instead of speaking directly into it. Or put a piece of paper between you and the microphone. Talking louder helps you get a better reception.
Thanks that was really helpful !