I agree with stratkat
the guitar riff with that kick is really cool. with some other fitting parts this could be really great. There also should be some vocals too.
It's pretty cool...
but the guitar tone really hurts it dude, you def need to mess with it more, or really I'd recommend not trying to use slayer or w/e you're using for distorted guitar, and just replace it with a synth.
I can hear the anime influence in it, not as an op or ed, but as maybe background music for a montage or a busy city scene.
Work on it and this could be great.
I didn't vote because a 3 would lower your score a lot atm since it's high.
If you have time it'd be awesome if you could review my song =chaoticinferno=
if not it's cool, but even if you don't want to pm-ing an opinion would be awesome.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.