I like the intro *tips incoming*
-With your bass after the drop, try to turn down the res of it and keep it in the lower end of your mix, when it's up in the high end you're losing the punch of it.
-The kick gets a little lost as well after the drop, look up some tutorials on layering your kicks and snares to get a more punchy sound.
-The intro has a really grainy sound to it which I like.
Keep working at it =D
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