Wow...Dude...

This just...TOTALLY Sucked ass. I'm sorry, but your going to have to do better than this...Horrible...just horrible...

great job dude

congradulations this is cool
my fav of urs up to date
havent listend to ur viewtiful remix yet)
i like how it intensified slowly

o and make it faster lol

Great Job

WinterWind

(=D) HA HA! YAY MAN!

There we go man now this is cool dude! Well i love the fact that this is tight! The drums could have been improved a bit more.

That male chorus effect was nice man! See man I KNOW if you wold have worked harder on the drums it would have been tight! Cause the drums you used in this were very strong!

Thise hats you used were nice when i got like to the midde part! But overall it was tight as it could be man!

Keep it V man!

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Hey man!

Usually, i write long reviews :)
So lets see what i can do.
(oh, and, try not to take any of this personally...your a really cool guy)

I liked the scratches in the beginning. I thought it was gonna lead to something very quick, so it followed its genre. DNB is usally very fast paced, but i feel as if it starts at a slow pace at about 100 or less BPM.
I like the song in general, but remember to change the notes of the bass, not just the choir.

Try to make it out a little more lively. Remeber that the first kind of Drum N Bass was jungle, which was governed by drums, bass, a small lead, and vocals. Drum n bass artists took out the lead, and the vocals, and simply had a drum, and a bass.

The drums were good, but i think it needs to be about 20 or 30 BPM faster. The bassline, i ADORE that bass synth. But i would truely love to hear its full potential. I just hear a bass bump every so often. When i should hear an entire bass riff, man!

Add pads in the backround, some glitches, awesome drum licks, and make the bassline fuller and make it follow the voice!

Good work, but like every musician, you aren't perfect. Get practicing! ;)

I can see you doing amazing works in the future :)

-zenon- or Zenonpi...whichever you prefer :P

yay

At first I was like what a piece of shit.....and then i waited to find out theres a godly type of sound.....and just as I heard the hi hats i thought somethin was missin untill then the beat came in, and it was awesome!......i like your build up style, but please not so long.....i waited a while to get in the spirit and it was short, great work though