Well currently it's an 8 imo...
I'm really not diggin those snares. But if you get a better sound for the snares, the rest of the stuff is awesome, this is a 10. Currently I think those snares alone are irritating enough to give this an 8. Yeah, so concluding, you did A NASTY JOB but you screwed with the snares imo.
Pretty Damn Good
I really liked this. It works well as it is but I think a slightly slower drum beat would have made the pace flow a lot better than it already is. All in all very cool.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.