Great song man
Heart on your sleeve, I really like your flow man. Keep it up bro you're talented for sure.
ay that means alot bro. thanks alot my dude!
Maybe a BIT too much like tupac, like how your raise your voice like that. Still sick.
i was thinking the same thing, but shit that was just me trying to make the words flow together more. much thanks though my dude.
Really like the rhyme scheme you got going on. The flow and delivery is decent; only part I had to squint (with me ears) was @ about 1:30, sounded a bit rushed there. The hook is really good. I"-I-I-i need a steady place to be.' <- Sick! Hmm...theres one wording choice that Im not sure about, "my motherfucking birth". Nice work twreckz, find that foundation brother.
ay thanks alot man. yeah i dont know ive been rapping for a little less then a year basicly. and not too good at this recording stuff. but i do try my best and im glad you gave me some good constructive criticism. thanks man. check out all my tracks and the ones ill be posting soon.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.