This was pretty good. I have to say I love the opening and how it plays in the background, if it was just that part but continued, added on here and there throughout the song, this would be a 10.
However, the wind instrument that plays in front just seems generic and kind've dull. It just sounds off compared to the background and it's rather boring. I mean, it's pretty good in terms of playing, but it could be better in both playing and sound.
Good luck, you're bound to get something amazing with the talent you show.
Thanks for the heads up!