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[e99] wip.. suggestions?

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I threw this together with awful transitions and everything just to see what people think of the sound basically.
What do you like/dislike? How do you think I should put this together?

edit: Really? people are downloading this and not even leaving reviews? Its shit like this, NG...

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Not Trance broskee, this would be Dance. The ending around 2:00 is the only real trancy sounding part. BUT, I like the bass you got flowing in here. Nice rhythm as well. Sounds like something out of TRON haha. At the break around 30 seconds you should add a light piano or bell melody and fade it down while the lower bells fade in (that you already have). Again, EQ balances. It felt like my ears are trying to rip the sound out of the song, don't be afraid to give it some power. There is a difference between energy and screeching loudness :P

e991e responds:

lol alright I'll start hitting you up before I add anything.
Thanks for the good reviews!

Here you go!

First - This hits like house. Plain old boring house.

the pattern for the chromatics is actually wonderful and I really enjoyed it, but if this is trance then at 1:29 - you can't just drop the main instrument , at least have one or two bells in background with a much smaller pattern representing the ambience.

feels empty after 1:29, and base from the start kicks in and it feels really bad... I can understand that its one of the most fun sliding basslines you have written... but doesn't go well with the rest of the track. I suggest changing the kick to a trance kick, the kick you are using is VERY hard. You want a bouncy kick. Trust me on this one. Also for the main bass synth that kicks in at 1:29 needs more power to it, EQUO it, play with some effects, dual it.

The same awesome bass synths I just mentioned that start from 1:21, should develop a longer time. Its trance, not just volume it in, filter it, flanger it etc.

put in some hats (long ones with reverb on it). Fix it up and repost it, to get a better vote. 4/5, and 7/10. No hate, just pure feedback.

e991e responds:

Many thanks!
This is exactly what I'm looking for.
Like I said,this is just a bunch of patterns thrown together to see what people think.

Credits & Info

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Listens
524
Downloads
25
Score
Waiting for 3 more votes

Uploaded
Oct 12, 2011
7:41 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
3.9 MB
2 min 28 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.