Contrasting from your old pieces, this song is a big improvement. Although the instruments are still overpowering your voice. I still think you could put some effects on your voice.
I can't say much about lyrics lol I usually listen to how it sounds rather than what is written (not on purpose of course). some effects would be nice on them.
Compression and EQ are your friends :)
Great song as usual. I love that harmonica.
Really appreciate the feedback, it means a lot. Sometimes I forget about these songs, but I'd like to get back into it once my guitar arrives here in Afghanistan. Thank you very much.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.