wow sounds trashy
Okay, to be honest...
- melody is very trite.
- your patterns are boring.
- your 'wah-wahs' from 2:30 onward are annoying at best, ear raping at worst.
Fair enough, thanks for an honest review. I've gotten better since this, I promise, and thanks for the critique. I totally agree with you. I like the melody I came up with but I didn't develop it enough and my wah's sucked.
Thanks for Honesty,
You got a good thing going here. Like the beginning could use some more dynamic melodies if u know what i mean. but overall its pretty nice. i like all the stuff u put into it.
I wanted a simple beginning, but I think my piano is kinda flat, and I'll see what I can do about adding in some better intro dynamics.
I think the main thing you need to work on is mixing. Mixing can make or break a song, so it's really important that you get that right. I like the choice of drums and instruments in this song, and I think it's pretty well composed. Keep at it!
And I definitely need some work with my mixing, it's getting better, but I'm still figuring everything out.
Glad you like it, thanks for stopping in!