I like the serious flange on the piano, very dreamy. The bass could definitely use some more ooomph(power). The drums, on the other hand, should come down by about 30%.
I would advise using some more synth elements in the lead. The piano is nice to start, but it gets out of place once the song picks up. Not too fond of the actual bass patch as well.
Not bad for just trying it out, not great though ;)
Sounds like there's some reverb that's drowning things out at points (30 seconds, for example). Check it out