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Heya everyone. Just figured I'd submit what I have on my song. I feel like this gloomy darkness is pressing on me, and the only to push it off is by sharing it with others in song form. I'm not satisfied with this, but with the crappy tools I have, it is close to impossible to improve on it. However, I did toil for many many countless hours producing the beat structures, melodies, vocal, and every little sound and effect.
And so I dump this intriguing little piece that I worked on for so many days on you guys. Do with it as you wish!! :D Peace out!


PS: I would count this song as being in the middle of my other two songs: Pain and Reunion...probably

Thoughts of life ahead of us
Running circles through my mind
Solitude is where I hide
Pushing through the silence,
I feel the burden of your breath
The trials that taught us
Shall stay ever close at my side
Searching throughout the pages of history
You will unearth countless stories like this one
Pushing past the limits of obscurity
We now have a rock to stand upon

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A couple of seconds into the song tears were wrenched from me, though I don`t get teary to often. Great song and hope you find that song that releases the burden of yours. My burden is similar but mine is of emptiness.

Jessismith responds:

Thank you, friend. It's words like these that encourage me, and keep me going. It means a lot!

That was a really really interesting song. I quite enjoyed. :)

Jessismith responds:

Thanks. ^^

oh my gosh

oh no you didn't . . . . .oh yes you did lol. You hit a new high buddy . Oh my gosh this is awesome. Man I realy gotta check out your songs more often. I like how hip this is. I never have heard you like this till now. I realy like the soft crying at the beginning. What do you call that, chanting??? and then when the beat and cool lyrics come it realy hits you in the face. Hey buddy I just submitted a wip on da and I kinda borrowed this. unfortunatly since there isn't much to it I could only show a few seconds of this radical tune. and all I can say is. . .more please :P

Jessismith responds:

Haha! Thanks buddy! I guess I just wanted to try something new. Well, maybe not new. I sort of started out with this style, like in my really old piece, "The Pain" Only I tried to improve the style a little bit. Well, I was just wailing at the beginning. Crying is a good way to describe it too....a long mournful cry. :) Hehe, indeed. :D That's exactly what I'm going for. I saw this in your WIP. It looks so awesome so far!!


Really loving the voice and melody! Sure voice in some parts is choppy,but the new fresh spices in the second half of song really kicks butt ;)

Jessismith responds:

Gintas!!! Yay!! Nice to hear from you! It's been too long, lol! :D
Thankies so so much. Glad you really liked it. :)

Very interesting...

The begging of the song was something I have been looking for awhile now, the melody flows perfectly with words. Not really sure what you mean by failure as I found little wrong with what you have so far, keep working on it. I'm sure that you will keep doing better as you progress. 5/5 10/10.

Jessismith responds:

Hey, thanks so much. I really appreciate that.
I definitely plan on adding more to it eventually. I guess I was just saying all of that out of frustration. I get like that when a song doesn't turn out as planned. xD
Thanks buddy.

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3.91 / 5.00

Oct 10, 2011
1:33 PM EDT
File Info
6.6 MB
2 min 54 sec

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