Very good, a lot of mixing problems.
I like the way you compose. It's very nice. It needs a bit of mastering, to eliminate the distortion. What program do you use? You can send files to me, and I'll try to mix them accordingly to sound clean and crisp :) Because the melodies are very nice
It has potential..
With some refining, this could be a fine song. Just not as it is.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.