Well I get what you are going for!
But those bass-lines need wayyy more sub-bass, and that drum track needs to be a bit more complicated then that. This tune sounds like it could be a really club banger, but at the same time; this render sounds like a bare skeleton of the track.
I really liked your dynamic work, and most of your patterns were spot on, but I think you need to take more time to work on your fine tuning
Things I would have done differently:
- Moar sub-bass
- Moar mastering/ mixing
- Moar drum kit work
- A LOT more sidechaining
Overall; Solid Effort!
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Thanks, Sonik! :) I'll be sure to take those things into account. Great review! :D