Nicely done i really liked this
Wow I really liked this, and so did my speakers, the only suggestion I would make, would be to turn the melodies volume down just a tad, turn your beats up a little more just to give it that oomph, the bass on this was awesome and I loved those melodies, I think those suggestions would be the only ones I can think of for you for when you plan to take this beyond being a demo
all in all this was really good!
Liked the theme a lot (the guy below me obviously shouldnt be in the trance or any electro catagory if he doesn't like beaps, and they weren't random so he doesnt know much about making music), it does get a little redundent, but you can fix that easy with little things, good song in the making overall.
it wasnt very good just a bunch of random beeps.