Trippy!

it's catchy! the song DEFINITELY matches the title, the melody is a little too random though, still great for a first song though :)

well

I certainly can tell this is your first song. Don't be deturred by my rating, good songs take practice... the first few won't score very high- (It's actually best to refrain from posting until you get some really great stuff.)
You just can't plop random notes down... You need a melody and harmonies and all of that. I'm anxious to hear how you develop as a musician, though. Keep trying.