that is all.
It really is. It sounds like it's supposed to sound kinda chaotic. Sometimes, the rhythm is unpredictable. In fact, alot of the time. =) It's not a bad thing though. I kinda like this.
What you did well here is the mixing. I hear everything just fine =)
Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.