woo dnb?
Not bad!
I like it, but it is just a tad bit repetitive. :(
And just a thought, maybe you could choose a more powerful-sounding snare. The song has a dramatic melody, and it would sound more intense if you added a snare that had more OOMPH in the treble frequencies, you know what I'm saying?
Anyways, overall, it was okay. Keep it up. :D
Thanks for taking your time to write a review :)
Yeah, well, I didn't use that much time on this song, it was mostly just an attempt on some DnB. If I used maybe a week or so, it might have turned out a bit different :)
Nice FLS Piano.
Very gritty but smooth. I think the beginning was a bit too repetative. Even when you changed it up at about 1:00 it still sounded similar- I think the cool stuff at 1:30 should have come sooner. But even then, you need to change it up. Even if you just have two loops in a row you really need to add stuff to change up one or the other or the song will become boring. And we all know that the average newgrounder has an attention span of about 30 seconds.
Overall just okay. Cool concept and synths, but your execution was less than par to me.
Thanks for taking time to write a review :)
I appreciate every comment I get, and I try to understand them and use them to improve my songs. And this was mostly just an attempt on DnB, but I will get better at it. And yes, I do agree with you that it was quite repetative! I've heard it before on one of my other songs :P
I'll spend some more time on my next song, and hopefully it won't turn out as repetative as this one!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
DJZelize 
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