I really like the lyrics you added. Please finish this!
Voice was beautifully unique. Sounded almost innocent. No idea what he was saying though. Remided me of Shrillex's stuff... cept less demonic. The dance part at 1:00 was unrefreshingly generic. To tell you the truth the into was the only part I really enjoyed wholly. The drums at about 2:18 come in too abruptly and stop likewise.
from 0:00-1:00 I give you a 9/10
from there on I give you a 6/10.
Break it up with something... anything. More vocals?
Lol yeah. This was just a preview. I completely forgot to crop out the last part of the song, as its unfinished. But thanks anyways. :) I JUST cropped it out