There is something characteristic about fl sounds
:p. I would use different sounds. Try to learn about how to eq well. That'll be a must. But before then. I'd recommend looking into some tutorials for sound design because that's where all of your sounds will come from. Either that or become a sampling beast. Also, make sure you don't let your volume clip (aka don't let the db meter go over 0db. If you want it to be louder, increase the volume on the computer, and then master it later (using saturation if you want the full bodied sound). Hope this helps get you started.
Thx for the review! I will take this info seriously, much appreciated!