Pretty good if you made it urself.
Are you accusing me of stealing this??? >:( Of course I made it myself. No wonder it's so short and shitty!
I love IT!!!!
plz make a full one this is awesome!!!!
w0000007!!! you're cool
not to bad, but...
the words kinda ruined it lol. soz to say but i seems like it. btw, FINISH IT!! lol. one thing i would like to say tho: make 2 full versions. one with the words and one without. not that u have to but just say in =)
good job dude ^_^
P.S. maybe u should get a REAL cat for the meowing part, rather then u meowing with an echo, Kay?
lolz hey man I loved meowing though!
Strategies for improvement time
Okay number one, move a little further from the mic and improve your volume, that increases clarity. 2, only spit your rhymes on beat. Dont think youre clever and try to incorporate 75 words onto one beat and still think your on beat. It wont work man but keep workin on dat in private. DONT SWAGGER. Youre unknown so we dont actuallly know if your doin that on purpose or naturally. Make your words make sense, dont use words that only the uber-geek has heard and understands just because it rhymes. If you dont have a word that rhymes find a metaphor or similie that does. SAY YOUR WORDS WITH FEELING MAN! Dont be all blah blah blah or we dont wana listen. Go for gold man! Also u edited your voice somehow , take it off or change that last sound to something else.
Gwan man im gunna b bak 2 hear da finished version coz i think u got potential.
Thanks for the suggestions, I was sort of in another state of mind when I wrote this, if you know what I mean. that might explain a few things. like the meowing. as for the big words, not everything I do is like that, but I wanted to have a song to show off my vocabulary... as much as I love rapping about "times" and "crimes" and the "throw-down" at the "ho-down" I wanted to write something a little more cerebral. but Im not saying its good. I just made it for fun and practice... thank you for your review