if you were to add a part where the song changed up a little it could become great, but it becomes a little too repetitive. You have the background goin good, just need to maby add a little melody.
Cool rhythm, really makes you want to move even though I can't dance. haha. It does get just a little boring though, maybe going in a different direction, give it a change. A bit of a break section, with a different genre's feel. Other than that it's very cool. Good work.
Thank you for your review :).
It's work from bad mood and long time boredom, so i'm not thinking about rhytm. It's just for good mood :).
Maybe i have bad english, i'm from Czech Republic.