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Sep 30, 2011 | 5:27 PM EDT
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4.38 / 5.00

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Alright, this is my shot at creating something more than just two samples going two notes all around.

This is another one of my practice songs, however I'm trying to learn THE BEAT in this one.

I want to make it sounds better, but my inspiration is currently pretty slacking.

So, I am very very open to some suggestions and feedbacks ;)



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The song itself is cool

But like you said, it is missing just a bit in the beat. Adding a hihat would help. I also don't see why you drop out the kick when you add snare, the kick can still hit every beat under the snare. The synths you're using are cool, but you need more bass, which you could add in with the snare. And as far as adding more to the beat, try listening to a lot of Latin. Latin music has a ton of rhythm, try listening to some Santana, or just look up Latin beats online. You'll get there, and you've got a good foundation for writing. Keep it up.

Deshiel responds:

Both Latin and Santana are totally unknown to me, but if it will help me to improve this song, I will give it a try.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I think you should structure it a bit better, divide the track into larger parts like the one with only kicks and the one where you added the snares. Also try to make the part with the snares more powerful via adding a new bass, that one sound kinda weak. And very great would be a dynamic lead sound that plays some nice fast melodies with legato. Very nice so far, keep it up!
7/10 | 4/5

Deshiel responds:

Thanks man, I will definitely try your ideas out when I'll get back to it.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

pretty good

This could go awesome :) You should just work at trying to get a good melody going, adding in some extra stuff making it amazing. The beat is pretty good. So yeah. 7/10 :) it's has great potential


Deshiel responds:

Don't you have a feeling that the beat is missing something ? Because I do and its buging me :(