I'm actually kind of liking this.
I'm surprised no one voted on it, let alone reviewed it besides me. Anyways, from the beginning, it sounded good. The only thing that gets me is that the drums, for me, seem to overpower the song. However, the song does kind of give a soft, heroic feel, while at the same time giving a feel of hope, that the hero will save them. Sounds a little rough, but since when is art about perfection? I like this piece. Keep it up!
P.S. If you'd like, feel free to check out my music. Just PLEASE, PLEEEEASE avoid my '07 ones. That was when I had no idea what the hell I was doing, lol. XD