Very strong melodic dance track you have here. The transition you created to the second main part is built up in a nice way! But I think you could still improve some things in this one. Overall the piece is a bit cramped, especially in the main part. Mostly the middle frequencies are very full because you didn't use a strong bass and too weak snares but many loud synths without any special domination, I'd suggest you put a deep (sidechained from the kicks) one onto it, should sound nice. As said, the snares could make use of more power. Also in the second main part I hoped for a few variations on a few elements, but it sounded like the first one. As the concluding part it should definitely have something unique to it. The rest is awesome as it is, keep it up!
8/10 | 4/5
If u stop making music, that would be end of the world...
Sä oot hyvä tekee Trance Dancee.
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loL mulle tuli fail
Somebody zero-bombed you.
And I'm pissed about it.
I gave it a 5 though, to offset the other person's stupidity.
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