For the most part I really like the drum beats and strings. I honestly think it would have been better if you added vocals though :p
The leads you chose are okay, but i notice that this song is kinda off key in some spots...
Here's what I suggest:
- This seems a bit busy, and the drum beats sound a bit generic
- The melody is pretty repetitive, and this song could use some dynamics
- The drums don't sound to great when everything breaks away, and they are heard by them-self for that couple seconds
-Honestly this track seems like it was done pretty fast, and lazily. (Really take time on a song, and work on it for more than a day if you're really feeling inspired.
Keep at it buddy!
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