You've got to put the "But wait till the end it gets better into the song" Tease the audience or have something to keep them hooked in. Good solid peice though.
Keep it up.
nothin too new here
the main arpish melody sounds like it was from fl. and theres not much variation... at all.. the beat is alright. the end is pretty koo like you said though. but it just gets a little boring. it would be good for a flash though.keep on makin more like this but with more variation and i was expecting a new melody to jump in near the end. somethin that really sticks out. anyways check my newest track, let it rain.
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