this is quite good work. not the best ive heard but definantly more deserving of what its been given. the main thing i want to say is to muffle the cymbal part a little more and to cut out the voice loops. also, the backbeat holds the melody in the beginning of the song, bring that out more. and on one last note, i gave you a 5 to boost up your score a bit. I wont stand by and let decent music be blammed.