this is quite good work. not the best ive heard but definantly more deserving of what its been given. the main thing i want to say is to muffle the cymbal part a little more and to cut out the voice loops. also, the backbeat holds the melody in the beginning of the song, bring that out more. and on one last note, i gave you a 5 to boost up your score a bit. I wont stand by and let decent music be blammed.
I'll do that and see what it sounds like. Thanks for your input :)
I dont know why 2 people zero bombed this, its not the best but its pretty good =p
Yeah, not to be egotistical, but I saw the first two ratings were zero and thought wtfh. It's not the best but it's definitely not a zero.