A pretty polished song.
The melody is incredibly fuzzy/distorted; a cleaner feel could benefit this song.
I like the various soundbytes and ambience. They're quite exceptional.
The drums are a little cliche as well, but the whole thing combines into a pretty solid DnB track.
Overall, I'd just like to hear some more experimentation and variation in your music.
Cheers for the honest critical review man. I appreciate your suggestions and will look into making use of them in further versions of this mix,as this is very much a work in progress.