every day Im rat a lin! lol but you know I love this song, much better than the first version
you say after a couple of times it fits... it doesn't... the beat works with the voices, but the melody is completely out of that rythm. The fun thing is, after the vocal part, the beat and melody are quite right. So, fix the middle part, maybe you could do that by matchin the melody and vocals together.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.