There is much work needed to be done here. You have great intentions and it shows. Just there is a lot of work matching both the drum beats to the piano work. I think a little fainter in the drums and raise the bass a bit more to form a better balance in the music would really do it justice. I await the masterpeice in it's next stage.
Well, the percussion parts really don't match the melody of this piece...Try to have the beat match up to every count of the triplet and it should match up better. It sounds very weird at the moment. Keep up the great work though ;)
I like this one!