I can definitely see how you envisioned a forest and the melody represented it. To me though I would add some bass instruments possibly a nice violin and cello and those could be the bass-line. Being I have a 2.1 speaker system even with my sub-woofer on max I hear no bass lol
Its barely present. Hmm lets see improvements time o3o
1. Possibly add some bass elements.
2.I noticed the song is mainly panned to the left speakers adding some bass in the center and another flute or flutes to the right of the song could fill the songs atmosphere more so.
Other then those 2 I guess not much else to improve to it being the only other things that could be done is make it into a full flesh and body song. But has a loop its still alright. Has for uses I can think of many that flash makers could use it in
Thanks for the comments :)
I'm not feeling a forest here. It feels more like medieval a castle town market theme to me. Still sounds good though. It's composed well, and it loops well too Keep it up!
I can certainly see a market as well. I suppose it's really just a general loop that can be used for anything really. Not neccasarily a forest. That's just what I thought when I wrote it. Thanks for the comment :)