im very sorry
to be rude in any way you can think of but
1. im glad you had the guts to upload this here
2. house music NEEDS skill otherwise it will sound like this.
3. 2-3 hours is not enough
4. drums are boring and all the same.. sounds like a pre made loop to me.
5. no compression at all, no pump at all
6. why do you call this house or even music.
7. 7 years in on Ibiza has nothing to do with this, or any kind of music production
8. music production is what YOU need to do
you spent 2-3 hours
making decidedly terrible house music. you demonstrated nothing.
i like the talkboxey bass riff at the start so do something that isn't a hypocritical faceplant with it! :)