really weak. Work on this one!
the redone ver. is almost complete
it sounds more like a trailer for a zombie movie now though lol
You had a pretty cool effect, but it's really dull. It holds up well, but it's weak, minimal, no substance.
interesting it is a WIP and my objective was to capture a atmosphere of horror
I will re-upload a complete version
thnx for the review I really appreciate it
I will take your advice there is allot of substance that i can add to it :)