I liked the twinklyness, it quite fits with the song actually, what I really feel that should be changed is the little drum loop at 3:25, its just too long and empty, I suggest making the build up longer and adding a tom roll/drum fill.
Like the groove...
Except for the extremely high pitched harsh 'tinkle' thing. It really broke the mood for me. Other than that, very nice! :)
The headphones I wore didn't make the bell seem that loud at all for me. If I redid it I'd turn it down for sure. Thank you though!
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