Was this written while you were on drugs?
This sounds like total and utter spew henceforth my mouth.
Although slightly catchy, it reminds me of dissecting my my brothers hampster while it was still alive. Watching it struggle around the kitchen bench was quite entertaining for a while, however when my parents got home and saw the amount of blood that was on the bench along with the entrails of a now 3 part hampster, the lecture that ensued told me that this was not worth it. To make matters worse, my little brother was still tied to the chair in absolute horror whilst having to watch his hampster mutilated.
So I guess what I was trying to say, did you write this song as a theme song to your life?
5 Stars and 10/10 mate!! Keep up the good work!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.