not bad
you got a problem i got.. you need a pop filter.
flow was kinda off a little in some parts
lryics was good
i really like how you did your hypes
overall i see some talent keep doin you
I was originally going to keep this for the mixtape, but since then I've made a bunch of songs that are better, so here's one of my newer tunes. :)
Enjoy guys!
And PLEASE leave feedback... whether good or bad. I love hearing from you guys and it really helps me to improve and work into the artist i want to someday be.
Thanks,
Bummer
Beat by BrokinPaper. Check his work out as well.
not bad
you got a problem i got.. you need a pop filter.
flow was kinda off a little in some parts
lryics was good
i really like how you did your hypes
overall i see some talent keep doin you
Thanks twickz. I'm looking for constructive criticism, so i appreciate that. I'll look into a pop filter and tighten up my flow. I have about 6 songs written that need to be recorded so far for this tape. Thanks again :)
This is an Amazing song.
It has awesome lyrics that speak truth. Amazing beats as well.
Thank you! Im always happy with feedback. Glad you liked it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.