not bad
you got a problem i got.. you need a pop filter.
flow was kinda off a little in some parts
lryics was good
i really like how you did your hypes
overall i see some talent keep doin you
Author Comments
I was originally going to keep this for the mixtape, but since then I've made a bunch of songs that are better, so here's one of my newer tunes. :)
Enjoy guys!
And PLEASE leave feedback... whether good or bad. I love hearing from you guys and it really helps me to improve and work into the artist i want to someday be.
Thanks,
Bummer
Beat by BrokinPaper. Check his work out as well.
BummerCityTown responds:
Thanks twickz. I'm looking for constructive criticism, so i appreciate that. I'll look into a pop filter and tighten up my flow. I have about 6 songs written that need to be recorded so far for this tape. Thanks again :)
This is an Amazing song.
It has awesome lyrics that speak truth. Amazing beats as well.
BummerCityTown responds:
Thank you! Im always happy with feedback. Glad you liked it.
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 901
- Faves:
- 3
- Downloads
- 52
- Score
- Waiting for 3 more votes
- Uploaded
- Sep 9, 2011
- 1:05 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 3.2 MB
- 2 min 22 sec
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
