Heh. Funny, the middle section is rather... interesting.
On a more serious note, I really like the way you handle your LFO's. From what I can see, that skill is going to serve you well in the longrun, I say that because I haven't practiced LFO automations at all. (All I do is set the knob at a certain rate, clone the synth, then set it at a different rate... it get's really messy.)
Your technique on the other hand gives the sound a very dynamic feel. Once you improve a bit on synth patching, it looks like you'll be able to dish some serious stuff!