I like! It's very well done. I don't know if you have any theory background, but it seems so. Well put together, and I especially like the rhythms. The snare with the pizzicato is also a very nice sound. I'm interested to see where it goes.
I have three years of theory background, entering my fourth year in IB.
I just had the idea of creating multiple sections exploring multiple musical languages. I have a Polytonal theme and I may stick a 12-tone section in for good measure.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.