It needs help...
But, i can see u making a hardcore version of this song! No doubt about it!!
Put more "tunes" if u know what i mean.
Ur friend IGPX!
I dunno what it is about ye music, but it lacks... pro-ness :P
Its still cool tho, maybe you could add some audience! And i can't work out where thers a benny synths :P
Anyway keep at it dude.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.