Very nice beat
I LOVED the beat, couldn't stop listenin to it, and the overall sound of the lyrics was good. However, I think it is noticeable that you are not a hip-hop rapper. The lyrical content and rythym of the rapping just does not sound like the tracks you hear in the top 40, but I wouldn't say you too were far off. Overall, I thought it was great man. Keep it up!
Thank you for the review. I may release the loop for this song because I can see someone using it in a flash. As for the lyrical content and delivery, I'm glad you think its not too far off... if you have any specific suggestions I'd love to hear em, PM me!